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A fair-haired man with someone to impress
Entered the great tournament of his land
Colors of his home splayed across his chest
With the best-laid sword held waist-height in hand.

Using all effort to put forth his best,
He realized his task was easy to do.
Brandishing his sword, he flew through his test
And the host announced, “The winner is you!”

The crowd jumped and roared, they were not lazy
Though he cared not, he wanted but one fan—
His father’s smile would make this win tasty
As only parental approval can.

His father said, “My dearest son, come here,
At home we shall feast royally of deer.”
Okay, well this was for school, so know that this was an activity where we were given the end rhymes in accordance to the rhyme scheme of a Shakespearian Sonnet. I got Gabe's words, so the ending is rather strange... but my English teacher thought it was really good, and I'm bored, so I decided to post it. Yay.

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:iconpsitack:
very nice ^^ reminds me of the Odyssey
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WolfenTears Nov 22, 2008
Nice, dear Brother. Very touching XD
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:iconrandomdudlegrl08:
-giggle- the last line of the second paragraph for some reason reminds me of Dr. Seuss XD don't know why lol, go figure. Great job! It was an excellent use of some else's words. Mine sucked XD
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:iconakatsukiame:
Yours didn't suck, it was cool. And thank you. :)
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:iconrandomdudlegrl08:
no, it was TERRIBLE XD
and you're welcome! im proud when i actually comment on people's work XD
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